I like the original song, but I agree with 4th Class, it feels to "empty", I would add some more instruments, this song is supposed to be EPIC, since it'll describe the amount of adventures in the game IMO.
As for the remix, the instruments sounds are too clipped for me, it sounds a bit distorted, and the same comment as above applies to it <!-- s:) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/orc2.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!-- s:) -->, nice work so far!